This is the first draft of the ancillary with the what my group and I thought what went well and even better if.
Newspaper advert:
WWW
- simple image thats not distracting
EBI
- change the text to channel 5 style
- make the image more relevant to the evolution of technology
Double page spread:
WWW
-
EBI
- put colour and image
- have less text and more simply laid out
Targets to improve:
- put more time into the ancillary
- look at more inspirational adverts and double page spreads to understand the conventional background image
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