Ancillaries draft 2

This is draft two of the ancillary with what  I thought went well and what could be improved.

Newspaper advert:
WWW
- the simple image
EBI

- more colour and have a better layout

Double page spread:
WWW
- some visual hierarchy can be seen
EBI
- have a less range of colour e.g one colour with different tones of it
- have a more organised layout

Targets to improve:

- Develop the images more - e.g old technology with new