Ancillaries draft 3

This is draft three of the ancillary with my notes of what went well and what needs to be improved.

Newspaper advert:

WWW
- image simple and similar to channel 5 adverts
EBI
- not have the text on top of the image - difficult to see

Double page spread:
WWW
- good colour layout
- some visible hierarchy
- good heading 
EBI
- better column layout - pull quote looks out of place
- heading to difficult to see


Targets to improve:
- black box made transparent to made the text easier to read
- made image less busy